1 If your not going to provide a picture please use more detail for your Shikai release form.
2. I need more describtion in your Shikai Abilitys the abilitys are not techniques. Hence if your going have a sound or wind type Zanpakuto. Your ability must be similar to that, meaning if your using wind in a example Your speed would increase, your Reitsu increases or somthing. Abilitys are what your Character gains once the Shikai is released.
3. Also please register your Bankai, you gained bankai from Getting the 11th divison captain position.
And 4th. If your going to be a captain your Zanpakuto should be a little more Advanced, so please go into more Detail about your abilitys, if your using sound please describe How your using sound to your Advantage.
f.y.i: Use the Zanpakuto Template. You get 3 Techniques for your Shikai, and 5 for your Bankai.